1st Draft of The Pursuit

This is the 1st draft of our documentary....

As it's the 1st draft I have highlighted problem which need to be addressed...

• The subtitles - They happen to fast which makes it difficult to see
• No voiceover recorded - This needs to be done well in final draft as it tells the story
• Audio levels - The sync in audio levels need to be better through out the documentary e.g when the music comes in.
• selection of shots - the shot selection needs more thought to piece the story together
• The colour balance - This will be done once the final project is exported, it will give it a sharp look and help to make the project stand out, look professional and attract the viewer